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Edit: I've added a dragon! Do you like? :?

So here is the colored version of the Tomoe picture. (if you want to see the line art go to my scraps.)

I think I did a really nice job with her. I love how her hair turned out! Very shiny and pretty. :aww: I'm also pretty proud of the white plum blossoms as well. I'm not usually great with flowers. The fan isn't the greatest, but oh well. I was going to put a design on the fan but I wasn't sure what type of design I wanted to put. Also I didn't want to ruin the whole piece, so I left the design out. I think I could have done a better job on her fingernails too. I know what I did wrong but I couldn't fix it since ink isn't erasable. :x

Well I hope you enjoy this piece! Here's the reference picture! [link]

prisma colored pencil

(c) Tomoe Yukishiro - Nobuhiro Watsuki

Critiques


:iconparanoid-duckkie:
Ok, first, the fan, you did a great job with the shape and the handle... there should be a pattern on it to make it stand out a little more and look more authentic... it is on things like this that I take advantage of the space to fill in with symbolism like white plums or an iris, or if she is thinking of Kenshin, a dragon.

The hair and the eyes are both very nicely done, I like the slight hint of purple. The hand is well drawn too, as is the framing with the white plum blossoms, very nice.

You did a nice job with the nose and the lips look good.

There is one spot that my attention is drawn to upon closer inspection... on the lift side of the picture, I can't easily see where her shoulder ends and the purple begins, there is an ambiguous area that just doesn't quite line up right.

I like the color pallet here... I need to stop now, my cat keeps walking on my keyboard forcing me to constantly fix the mistakes... over all nice picture
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:iconivory-luvs-ebony:
Awwweh, great job on this. I love how you did the hair. :O

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I'm just a face for every picture,
a smile for your scrap-books,
and a story to be told,
but I'm loving every second
so commemorate this hour,
As the last I spend regretting what I have.

Without a doubt, you're all I dream about.
:iconleahhimura24:
Why, thank you! :thanks:

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~God and I have something in common, we're both artist. :aww:
:iconamie689:
Oooh! I like fan, its just nice and not overly done. Like the hair shading too and the hand pose :)
:iconleahhimura24:
Thank you! :aww:

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~God and I have something in common, we're both artist. :aww:
:iconparanoid-duckkie:
Ooh, I do like the edit, very nice dragon... I guess she got it cause it makes her think of Kenshin. ^__^x

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When Einstein revealed to the world his wondrous theories of Special and General Relativity, I was the one shouting, “That’s what I was going to say!”

Ignorance killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.

I like cherries!!!
:iconleahhimura24:
Heheh, that's why I would get a fan. :giggle:

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~God and I have something in common, we're both artist. :aww:
:iconparanoid-duckkie:
:giggle: What ever works. ^^

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When Einstein revealed to the world his wondrous theories of Special and General Relativity, I was the one shouting, “That’s what I was going to say!”

Ignorance killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.

I like cherries!!!
:iconred-winged-angel:
Wonderful job on the hand! The nose needs a bit more shapening and you need to clearify to where her right shoulder ends. Other than that you did a wonderful job! =)

Ari chan

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"Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it you will land among the stars."
- Les Brown

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